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I really loved you,
And everything you would do.
So when you looked at other people,
I pretended that I didn't see you.
But when I met him,
He said he loved me too.
And that was when,
I had no idea what to do.
He had a girlfriend, too,
Does that matter to you?
I loved him more than I loved you,
But I just couldn't forget about you.
You did love me, I know,
By the small things you said and did.
I understood that, you know,
Which is why I didn't want to let you go.
But I just can't understand this,
I can't figure it out.
It seems like it's endless,
And I don't know how it will turn out.
So believe me when I say I love you,
Because I do mean it, I do!
But don't be upset, don't hate me,
Just because I love him too.
- by NekoJohnnyCade |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: I'm Sorry That I Love You
- Artist: NekoJohnnyCade
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Description:
My friend Mayaa wrote this in high school when she was in love with someone else while she had a steady boyfriend. In the end, she stayed with her boyfriend, who she's still dating two years later.
She has no idea I'm putting this up. Shhh. ^_~ - Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: sorry love forgiveness cheating heartbreak
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Comments (6 Comments)
- ll-0RACL3_kun-ll - 04/23/2009
- 5/5 biggrin I like your poem coz it rhymes which is my type..I'm going to submit my first poem soon so pls check it out. Thanks
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- Farrelei - 01/04/2009
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It's nice and simple.
The rhyming is annoying though, especially when you repeat the same word in order to rhyme once up there.
But it is an easy conveying of feelings. - Report As Spam
- zama-kun - 01/04/2009
- its a nice poem ^^ 5/5
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- A-Class01 - 11/30/2008
- This is one awesome poem. I love the ending, keep on writing poetry, Minchir, you've got a talent.
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- VengefuI - 11/28/2008
- I actually kinda like it =D
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- NekoJohnnyCade - 11/28/2008
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Yay, someone thinks this is horrible! XD
I don't think it is. I like it...
XD
I must have bad taste... I helped her write parts of it, so if parts are crap that's all me XDXD - Report As Spam