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You might not always see me, hear me, or sense me,
however, I am always there.
Watching, waiting, for you to finally see me,
to feel me.
When you are playing, or working, I am always close by,
protecting you from dangers all around you,
even dangers you are not aware of.
When you are asleep, I stand by your bed,
making sure that you have good dreams,
not bad.
When you die, I am the one that leads you to heaven,
or hell.
You might be wondering of who I am,
but you already know.
I am your Guardian Angel.
- by I The Ring I |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: Guardian Angel
- Artist: I The Ring I
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Description:
I got a detention for this poem, i never got an answer why.
oh well.
i hope you all like it! - Date: 11/28/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx - 12/08/2008
- i dont think you ould get detention for writing hell! i mea, its in alot of GOOD poetry, am i right? maybe you got detention because your teacher thought you were a stalker @_@
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- Jacy_Arienh_Sagira - 12/07/2008
- You probably got detention for a religious poem, and possibly saying hell.
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- kat663 - 12/06/2008
- i realy like the peom but the first time i read it i didn't read the title so i was saying to myself stocker. but i reread it and i loved it.
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- Lostt Eviie - 12/06/2008
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@Mystic's comment: It was used as a place and she wasn't insulting anyone with it, so the detention problem remains unsolved... 5/5
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- METRO SKiiES - 12/06/2008
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Pretty good... did you get a detention because you were writing it during class or something? Or was it because you put the world "hell" in it?
But yes, that's a pretty good poem, compared to SOME on this site. I'd give it a three or a four, but since I can't do half-stars with this system I think I'll be nice and give it a four, since you suffered for it.
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- x0xTohru-Hondax0x - 12/06/2008
- I love that poem!!
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- Sugarhigh234 - 12/06/2008
- biggrin Oh ma fawking gawd this is an awesome poem ♥ You probably got a detention for BEING TOO GOOD!! XDD jk jk. It's probably because you put Hell or something like that. 5/5! ^o^
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