night and day

• Artist: x_Sweet_Demonic_Dreams_x
• Description: i wrote this a while ago thought maybe i could share it with many of u gaians..
  leave comments and tips on what i could to make it better
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: nightandday

i wish to walk the night
where everything is better
the stars lay far..
the moon lays near..
all shining down to make thing better...

at any day of time..
walking the moonlight is like heaven..
and walking the daylight is like hell
night is where i must belong
i can get away from all the pain
just lay and gaze at the stars like its a game..
instead of be made into someone else next game
counting each star i see..
instead cutting each and everyday...
the stars r not ones to judge..
so don't be scaryed to cry in front of them
they don't mind.. it only bc they care

the moon will always lay near
just enough so i can feel
it sweet tender gaze...
the star will always lay far
as do my hopes but can turn in time..

the night must be where i belong ....

Comments

[Nikki4815]

umm...nice meaning. I like it, but you could edit it a bit more, maybe make it a bit more refined. But it's a great start, so I give you a 3/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"

[musicbyme]

is prety good.i'd give it a 3 rating razz sorry. you just need a bit more practice so keep on writing.obtw ... first comment yeahhh!

[Ag3nt0FchaoS]

This catches my attentio n