my crush

• Artist: starwarrior3000
• Description: girl meets boy and falls in love,her feelings tward him. it dont rhyme intentionally
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: crush

when i saw u my world crumbled
everything i once knew,shattered
my heart and mind were u and only u 24/7
with each passing day i love u more
please dont hate me when i tell u this
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i really like you and u r all i can think of
please understand this
LOVE,
Your other lover

Comments

[starwarrior3000]

I am so sorry but I was really depressed that day so that is why it is not correct on the spelling or the grammar, I appologize.

[Prince Of Buzz]

I cannot stress this enough, but when writing... PLEASE spell correctly. There are free spellcheckers online and the like, so please use them. Even with the most phenomenal of work, misspelling could make it look terrible.

Also, try to use a bit of creativity when writing. Anyone can say "I love you, please love me back" but you could try making it a bit more poetic, or putting some symbolism in it. Just try to make your writing a bit more interesting.

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