Beautiful misery

• Artist: UNKNOW dude ii
• Description: comments please =)
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: beautiful misery

Beautiful misery
Full of despair
To cause this sorrow
It takes a pair

One to fall in love
And the other who couldn’t care less
What starts as a one sided love story
Ends in a blood stained mess

Beautiful misery
Full of love, full of hate
Eternity flashes through the mind
Forever alone is the fate

Tears seep from the eyes
A picture perfect scene
With agony comes beauty
But also a heart that screams

The reason this happens
Forever stays a mystery
Such pain and suffering
Brings upon this beautiful misery

Comments

[Dayzheart]

great poem
not too dark or fake
it is real 5/5

[-Top3z-]

I like ^^

[xXx_C H U C H U_xXx]

Good job 5/5!! |pats head|

[hinatagirl1112]

wonderful piece! A work of art! we must chat some time....

[Arishy]

The theme is generic, but the poem is not. So you deserve a huge congratulations on that! You had great word choice and imagery too.
I would really like to hear this poem too. This would make a really strong slam poetry piece. 5/5

[Winter Xeni]

i live how there is some rythmes and i love the words that are in the poem. it sounds like a romance to me and i love it.

[x-tweedle-dum-x]

wow that is really good
kinda sounds like an anime i watch now (vampire knight)
sorry i compare everything to anime