Reaper of the ocean

• Artist: malena estel
• Description: this is a poem that i wrote for a very special person in my life I like it soooo much i thought id share it with you i hope you enjoy it please comment i wanna know what u think >.<
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: reaper ocean love

Reaper of the ocean

reaper of the ocean
so dark and deep,
the one i give my heart to keep
and even when i dream the only thing i seem to see
is the sweet imigases of you and me

reaper of the ocean
so sensative and sweet,
the love we share cannot be beat
your my friend,my soulmate,my love
words cannot begin to say
as i begin to count the ways in which i love you so,
your love i hope will never go

reaper of the ocean
with heart so pure
like serene waves upon the shore
your love makes me spread wings and sore
over the clear blue ocean where ill always remember you

reaper of the ocean
my reaper of the ocean

Comments

[Melody_Wolfgirl]

thats just beautiful! 5/5 i dont care if its spelled wrong

[KakashiKun 94]

It's beautiful... I guess I find it so powerful because I can relate to it. I have a very special someone in my life, too. But yea, there's a few words that aren't spelled right, but other than that, I love it!

[NebuChi3]

You have some words spelled wrong, but it's good.
Just like what yassygurl said, it's unique in its own way, and I can't figure it out.

[Noche de Dulce]

Oh I like it. Its unique in its own way. Not what you normally see but good. I like how you rhyme some times but don't. ;D I like the concept of 'reaper of the ocean'. It has its own steady flow.