My Red Rose

• Artist: xxmellymelz09xx
• Description: This is a poem i wrote for an english class, and i was supposed to write it in onli like a couple of minutes, so thats why its pretty short. no hate comments plz :-)
• Date: 12/02/2008
• Tags: rose

Red rose, Red rose

as bright as can be

I lay it there

under the christmas tree

So alone

and cannot make a sound

Waiting for someone

to just come around

People pass by

and ignore it comepleatly

There lays my red rose

Alone, and weeping. cry

Comments

[290DarkStars]

sounds like a good poem, and it also sounds like there is a class feud between you and the chick under me (When I say "chick" its not a compliment or an insult.) But a weeping, lone rose is still something that may cheer me up... after all, how many times has someone even liked me enough to put a rose beneath my tree.

[Darling-Dani]

I remember this and y u keep calling me a b*****d ??? i mean i dont like hate comments and i didnt steal ur idea about war i mean half the ppl in our class wrote about it so razz