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• Artist: SEXIACilla
• Description: I wrote this maybe 2 years ago.While thinking about taking changes. I want to know if like you it or if you don't. What I can work on? I am open to any comments so please comment!
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: poetry chances

IF
You are going through the motions
Afraid to step out of your comfort zone
Stop
Worrying
If you can’t say anything
Stay silent
If you love
Love with passion
If you must go
Leave
Don’t look back
Spread out into a new place
Go into an unfamiliar place
Don’t ever stop with the creativity
End the negativity
Be.

Comments

[original288]

it's so good. i love it :]

[zane104]

I think you should of ended it with let be instead of just be and don't add the title to the poem space its already in the title.