Demon

• Artist: xFallen-Shadow-Wolfx
• Description: my stupid poem i made up....i think it sucks....i dont care about ur evil comments And this is basically the story of my life
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: demon

Life of a demon



No one understands the way we feel
The pain
The misunderstanding
Or even what it feels like to be hated.



Is it the way of life?
Or what it was meant to be like for us?
Why are we scared to talk to others about whats happening?
Is there even a God above?


I stopped believing long ago
If somehow one of us finds happiness
Then ill believe again


Until then
I will always be hated by others
I may have friends
But I still feel empty inside




~this is my boring poem~

Comments

[Girlhawk]

I somehow feel one with this poem... I also made some lyrics like this...
I still have a hard time finding true happiness, but I make of it what I can (as I write in my song wink )
I don't think this poem is boring wink nor stupid razz because it actually touches people wink
5/5 and favorite smile

[Fox-Cruton]

In the first four lines it seems like your talking to a broad group of people like myself and The outcasts of high school. Reminds me of Hermann Hesse's poetry type.Also 13 out of 10.- Fox.

[Maki Casanova]

Not all demons are hated by others. In fact, some mingle quite well with humans. Nevertheless, it's an ok poem.

[Intimate Darkness]

Great 5/5

[xxaracelyxx]

this is how i feel most ofthe times. great poem.

[rose-from-concrete]

it's not boring! =P very deep, i like it smile gave it 5 stars

[Augee]

Good job~ very nice! The characterization is very deep of the speaker.

I could recommend adding grammar to it though, it makes it look more professional and ... poem like ... unless you want to be like e.e. cummings. biggrin

~Emy