I have to let u go

• Artist: softball678
• Description: this is about one of my best friends. Please be nice this is my first poem
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: have

You were my best friend
I love you alot
You were always there for me
When i saw the ambulance at your house that morning my heart sank
All threw the day
I thought you were ok
But when i got the word that you were down and gray
That your eyes would never open again
That you would never take another breath
You were a true friend
More than i was to you
My heart will always be with you
You will always be on my mind
But i know that your in a better place
But its time to let you go

Comments

[OneXMuerte]

This is not a poem, just ramble and could be considered pose. Do your research.

[Seras_Victoria12485]

Reminds me of my grandfather, who died in 2001. Very good, I think.

[xXxvampire_lolitaxXx]

aww cass thats so nice! ive never read anything poetry by u before. just stories that u write

[Grand Shadow Wolf]

i have question is it a free verse poem a rhyming poem or what because it doesnt match either 3/5 for effort though (isnt this about josh the kid who died last year)

[Zenonia_Regret]

i luv it cass... but u spelt were wrong xP
it's were not where >w<
anywho 5/5!!!!