Feather Wings Of An Angel

• Artist: jkfdklfsajksca
• Description: The title is supposed to be Feathered Wing of A Fallen Angel, but it wouldn't fit =_=
  Written for a school assignment. Please comment and vote fairly.
  I would love to hear what you think of my other poems.
  All poems I have written are in my journal.
  Friendly critisizim please =D~
  
  
  (Picture not by me.)
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: feathered wings fallen hell

Alas, I am a fallen angel
Server of Satan, reciever of pain.
Feathered wings dyed black with hatred.
Insanity will be recieved.

You'd never want to live as I have,
The loss of hope stings evermore.
Agony, burning of the innocent.
Loosing my way in everlasting darkness.

How do I keep my wings of freedom?
Locked down, never to fly again.
Rage, vicious, as a lions roar.
Let me out of hell.

I am a prisoner of my mind.

Comments

[ii_Rawr_FreeHugsii]

awesome

[TheAutumnDandy]

I love it.
The feeling in this poem...
Pure hatred~
And I think she ment to set a dark mood with the word "alas"
It just makes the story flow~

[Whookie]

everything is gud
i think u shouldnt have put alas as the first word....its one of those words that automaticly sets a mood which u dont want...but it looks good to me

[cuete23]

this is real good

[jkfdklfsajksca]

Please comment~