A heart only THEY can heal

• Artist: DarknessXSurrounds
• Description: A poem i wrote last night when my crush was on my mind. I dont know really, I think its a good one...comments?
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: heart only they heal

I look at you, and I feel my heart break.
I wish you would just understand, for my sake.
I want to make you feel good.
But I know, in my heart, I never could.

I always knew from the start..
That I shouldn’t listen to my heart.
Now, all I feel is pain.
Slowly, I’m starting to feel, that I am going insane.

You’ve never bothered, to look and see.
How your words, really affect me.
False hope, and potential lies.
Have made my heart soar, up to the skies.

I wish you wouldn’t reject me.
It really shows how little you see.
Please, don’t toy with me anymore.
My broken heart, is way to sore.

Comments

[selene_queen_of_a_lost]

i know how that feels. But like hidden said if u really care for him like the theme of your poems suggestions you should do something to find out how he feels the worst they can say is no it might hurt but what if wont tear you up inside but other than that if he can inspire you like that now i cant wait to see you next poem after u take my advice!!!

[Hidden Shadow Love]

Your poem reminds me a lot of my crush. I wonder, do you try to hide your feelings from him? (You don't have to answer that.)

Nicely done. Clearly it points out your feelings he gives you, but also how much you care for him.