Perfect Distortion

• Artist: S a r r u h B u n n y
• Description: I wrote this one night when I came home from a long day at school. I was extremely bored and decided that I was going to write a poem. So, this is out of sheer boredom. I'm not saying that I am expecting you all to bow down and worship me, because I think that if that's what I wanted I wouldn't be posting my stuff in an arena on the internet. This is simply submitted because I want to see what people think of my work and what people think I should change and what they like about it.
  
  
  
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: perfect distortion

If I draw a picture,

Would you take the time,

To appreciate it?

The way I do,

For you?

Draw one for me and I'll draw one for you

We'll spread them around the world,

We'll spread our creativity,

Our happiness,

Happiness?

So draw me a picture,

A pure mirror image,

of the world gone dark,

Wel'll mix and distort,

Make a perfection a perfect distortion,

We'll make them believe we belong,

We'll make the world appreciate darkness

Paint me a mirror image,

Of the red and orange sunset,

The beauty of the fading sun

Paint me a picture,

And I will paint one,

For you

Comments

[tunyt]

i like it. it sppunds like you put alot of thought into it. i dont know, maybe you did or didnt, but i like it. 5/5