gardian angel

• Artist: Aya-Whitewater
• Description: i dont know why i wrote this it just came to mind.
  
  dont be mean
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: gardian angel ours

she feels pain,
flowing through others

she cries for them,
wishing she could help.

God answerd her wish,
now she goes aroung carring half the pain.

she is happy now,
she still cries but there're for the pain she cant take

She helps us all,
shes are gardian angel

She flies by are side anly to help,
she asks for noting just your pain

shes the only angel we have to our selves,
shes our gardian angel.

Comments

[animewolf16]

This is good, fix the errors please. smile

[Nikki4815]

I like it. But you should fix where you said "are" instead of "our". 4/5. Rate back?

[sonedude]

very nice