The pace of rain

• Artist: Silent_Usagi_XxX
• Description: i wrote this one a rainy monday night. it was cold. i had been heart broken. this guy i had liked moved away. he always has been there for me. well he had. i never here from him. he always was like a brother. we didnt have a "we", he knew how i felt. he felt the same way. but he was leaving and didnt want a relationship. so on the day he left he kissed me on the cheek good bye. it was rainy on that day.
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: pace rain

sitting all alone listening to
the rain hit my roof
my heart is split into two
i cant think
only focused on him
As i cry, the rain starts
to fall harder
i cry more- its
a down pour
time eventually goes on
im am calm
the rain starts to slow
i stop weeping- its the
end of the storm
as i cry the rain cries with me
forever and always it shall

Comments

[Silent_Usagi_XxX]

lolz tht was such along time ago tht was last year. *hugs* thnks tho

[Amadeli]

awww, usagi! as i stated before, i am always here for u, k?
3nodding will a 5/5 make u feel any better?

[Silent_Usagi_XxX]

thanks

[darksangel34]

awwwww...thats so sad...urs is a lot better than mine...and a lot sadder..*starts sobbing* it makes me think of Con-con...
extreamly good though...5/5

[Silent_Usagi_XxX]

AWWW THNKS

[Jacy_Arienh_Sagira]

I like the way you wrote this, most people seem to think when you write you have to rhyme. And you definitely got the feelings right, I can tell what it is you were feeling simply by the words. Good job!

[Silent_Usagi_XxX]

thank you all