MY first funeral (poem by me)

• Artist: L e n n o n xx
• Description: This is about when i was i think 6 or 5 years old and i went to my grampies funeral and i remeber it all so clearly so i wrote it down.(in need of a critic)
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: first funeral pome

Through the bright eyes of a confused child, I didn’t know what was

Happening in this lifeless room full of weeping people, mysterious faces

painted with a dark mask of sorrow. They were standing around a beautiful

Wooden box, it was decorated with beautiful white flowers that looked as

If they were made of silk. As the cluster of people slowly parted I saw what

It was that was causing them pain. He was drained of color and so pale

Yet so peaceful. His wrinkly face no longer smiled down at me, he was

looking up at me with a very peaceful face. I knew where he was now, he

was and will forever be, with God

Comments

[L e n n o n xx]

i advise u to check out my other poems one is called: A still winters eve and the other is He takes up his cross

[L e n n o n xx]

Thank you. smile

[II_Fallen_Soldier_II]

good job very deep and sad