My attempt at an explanation

• Artist: The Kuma
• Description: It's old peotry I wrote back early on in HS
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: attempt explanation emos gays truth

Let me break
And shatter into a million pieces
Let me cut
And bleed until I can't anymore
Let me stay awake
And be alone in my darkness
Let me cry
And scream until I lose my voice
Let me fail
And accept the I don't care
Let me be myself
And stop trying to change me
Let me accept it
And don't get mad when I can't
Let me hurt you
And realize it hurts me too
Let me hurt
And understand that I want the pain
Let me shut down
And know that I'll still let you in

Comments

[XXXXblackbloodXXXX]

story of my life I like it I give it a 5

[The Kuma]

lol.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Eh, unimaginative and weak, but I ahve definitely seen much worse pathetic excuses for "poetry" on this site. 2/5(only because there are so many much worse poems in here).

[Cezille07]

This is an amazing work! Ironies, but very real. Good job, and keep writing! smile

[JuJuBee24]

Yay first comment it was sad but i loved it:] 5/5

hey if you could go check out my poems and tell me what you think smile