The Music Isn't Loud Enough

• Artist: SweetDreamsMyLove
• Description: One of my older poems. A sad time when I wrote this but I still think it's pretty good.
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: music isnt loud enough

Have you ever had something that just won't leave
From your head?
From your mind?
From your heart?
Have you ever just wanted to scream until it
Goes away?
Or is simply
Forgotten?
You've tried everything.
Even music
Blaring through your speakers
On full blast
And dancing your heart out.
But then you run into a problem:
The music isn't loud enough.
So you fall to the ground.
All the screaming:
A total waste.
And the loud music?
Just another headache.
Silent tears fall down your cheek
All because
The screaming screwed up your throat
And the music
Just isn't loud enough.

Comments

[PandaEnlightenment]

I really like your poem's end, but the beginning just doesn't seem like it fits, IMO. You might change the beginning, but definitely keep the end. Its lovely. ;] 4/5