Game Over

• Artist: Venomous Crimson
• Description: You know when you wake up one day and think it’s going to go well and then something wrong happens and it all go down hill from there and there is no way to back up. I personally have had one of those days. It breaks my poetic soul free and inspires me to find a way to calm myself with out doing any thing harmful. I hope you really like this. If not I will accept criticism in either way of fashion.
• Date: 12/11/2008
• Tags: game over life

Life is like a game.

Once you hit start, you can’t turn the game off.

You have to sit for constant hours finding something do.

You have to be careful who you hurt.

You have to be right or there are no points rewarded.

You have to play by one subject’s rules or you’re disqualified.

You have to earn someone respect in return they earn yours.

Life is like a game.

Once you hit start, you can’t turn it off

Comments

[Spicesayy]

this is good...very nice similie

[Raypg]

You're poem was very nice. But it's just odd how I say the EXACT same things in my poem descriptions. Like the critism thing and how it lets you express yourself safely. smile I like it.