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Her eyes so delicate
My heart completely aroused
Her breath so sweet
My mind completely ground
The look in her eyes
so delicate, yet elegant
the hands of the beautiful
so soft, so gentle
Our love, impenetrable
the time of our lives,
unalterable
Alas
The sweet breath of death
unfortunately unavoidable
I would whisper to her
10000 times over
I love you, I love you, I love you
her warmth filling my soul
if i perish, the only thing you should know
my love for you happens to be
pure, brewed straight from my soul
- by haonkurama |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/11/2008 |
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- Title: Pure
- Artist: haonkurama
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Description:
A shorty. Hope you like.
- Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: pure love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ---xMiss_Amaya - 01/03/2009
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thats really amazing. There are some of the lines that stand out the best that are incredibly descriptive.
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- meobear - 12/12/2008
- ZAH good job kind fellow! I like it, 5 outa 5. If you have the time feel free to go thru my gallery and vote back biggrin
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- SweetSunshineGoddess - 12/12/2008
- I love several of these lines. "pure brewed straight from my soul" and "so delicate, yet elegant" awesome job. Good length. It was captivating.
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