Unrequieted

• Artist: ms_yun-yun
• Description: This is a poem about me and that special someone. I haven't told him how I feel, but I hope that our thoughts are the same <3. Please comment and rate^^.
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: unrequieted

I see you in the hall,

Outside after school;

On that baseball field with your friends

Trivial glances-

We look away

These little glances fill me with hope,

They make my day.

I wonder if they make yours, too.

Nothing can describe my feelings for you.

Comments

[Gray Walls]

Love it.

[ustho]

I like them rythmatic shifts though possibly unknown, and i definitly like the tone. You should try and tell him, and it's not like you'd just be doing it on a whim. Like the peom, 5/5.

[AliceCullenRoxMySoxOff]

that is so cool and so touching and u should so totally tell him how u feel seriously u should tell i bet ur really cool to know