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Calling you up
On a Saturday night
Holding my breath
No answer
Why do I bother?
I'm tired of small talk
Tired of pretending
That we're still close
Pulling apart
Falling down
Turning blue
- by Simply Rainie |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Tired of Pretending
- Artist: Simply Rainie
- Description: Another poem inspired by a friend.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: tired pretending love hate pretending
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Comments (5 Comments)
- METRO SKiiES - 05/18/2009
- I love it! Simple, but very effective. The feelings are great, and the short, snippy word choice gets the message across incredibly well. It's so simple I thought to give it a four out of five at first but once I read it again I realized how much it helps the whole idea. Five stars and favorited!
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- Ms Make Me Smile - 02/18/2009
- im sorry i know the feeling 5/5 its honest and compassionate i love it so much
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- commander ant Man - 02/17/2009
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cool
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- xXx The Prodigy xXx - 12/16/2008
- Clarification, is turning blue meaning suicide? the end isn't clicking with me.
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- Charlie Loves Apples - 12/14/2008
- I love it. 5/5
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