why don't you run?

• Artist: carlisle cullen lover
• Description: ok so first of twilight inspired this poem. i know...thats sad.....but when i read a good book that happens. any way i hope you like it.
  
• Date: 12/16/2008
• Tags: love lose

Oh, how I wish you understood,
how much strength it takes me to be good.

I don’t understand, you see,
why it is you do not flee.

Most people would run and hide,
but you stay firmly by my side.

You stand there strait and tall,
like I don’t frighten you at all.

I try to tell you to go,
but you say and fight against your every foe.

You still cant seem to comprehend,
why this must be the end.

Comments

[carlisle cullen lover]

would you people stop correcting my typos! i know i make them but i cant correct them once i've submitted the piece!

[Wolfriver]

"straight" instead of "strait" is another one smile

[Gasoline-angel]

umm...
do I HAVE to be your friggin spelling mentor???
augh!!! that makes meh mad! say=Stay!!!
oh well I'll give you a 5/5 its a chick flick though...I'm too nice to girls...