Someone Else

• Artist: Rekkia-chan
• Description: I wrote this poem a while ago, but I figured it was pretty good so I posted it here. Let me know what you think of it!
• Date: 12/17/2008
• Tags: someone else chicken soup

Why do we always try
To be something we aren't?
We lose ourselves in the minds of others
And forget who we really are.

All the while
As we change our
Thoughts
Actions
Words
The earth's color gets dimmer
With one less bright personality
To enlighten someone's day.

So look in the mirror
And ask yourself why you change
When the real role model...
Is you.

Why do we always try
To be something we aren't?
We lose ourselves in the minds of others
And forget who we're destined to be.

Comments

[SweetSunshineGoddess]

I liked this. Very concise, but somehow elegant at the same time. Good work. Glad you posted it. I enjoyed it.

[Rekkia-chan]

Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you read it through. Hopefully something else I come up with will catch your interest better!

[B-B-B-BeanCup]

I got bored reading it.

[Unfound Dreams]

I like it. It sound slike one of the points I try to get across to dozens of people. I think taht you did a great job explaining what I could not, and helping people understand things iun new ways. Keep up the good work! biggrin