Maiden Willow

• Artist: The Turtle Lemon
• Description: Phew! Okay, this took half an hour to conjure up, despite distractions. I'm not completely satisfied with it, but the inspiration is fading. If it isn't obvious to some, this poem is about a tree, not an actual woman. ( Despite that, my mom thought it was about a maiden TT wTT Oh mom... ) I would like to hear your own interpretations, as well as any feedback or criticism. There's always room for improvement. :]
  
  ~Lemond
• Date: 12/18/2008
• Tags: maiden willow

She is beautiful.

Standing eternal in the choice of fate,
Her gaze never wavers nor worries.
Arising from a slumber of diamonds,
emeralds blossom from the veil once held in her arms.

The breath of another weaves through her locks,
his warm embrace only stolen by stars.
Memories glisten on blazing gems,
their flames dance beneath her.

Wrapped by heavenly robes,
begins the descent into dreams.
Time caresses her tenderly,
while wise in age,

She is beautiful.

Comments

[Dragon_Fears]

i likes it although my enterpretation was of a maiden as well
I liked it good job

[baddav]

good but u could do better

[iKeyBlades]

yay saffo !
i dont find myself criticising ur poem seeing as how i cudnt do better...
so uhm excellent job! xD

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

Nice.