My poem

• Artist: October098
• Description: im not emo.........but im deppressed........i dont cut myself but i want to die
  
  .............but whatever if you say im fine.........your wrong..........after all.....your not me
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: poem

A ring of darkness surrounds me
I can't breath
Im pulled closer into the dark abis

I'm forced to be alone
the pain runs through my vains
Im forever cursed with pain

All I can see is darkness
my heart is breaking
my eyes burn like fire from the tears

My life will never be filled with joy
Im darkened with sadness
Im alone forever

Forced to be my own slave
Forced to be in pain
Ill never be free

.............................ever

Comments

[chips in the pan]

Eh..it's good but I'm not really feeling it.
p.s. yes, I am clinically depressed before you criticize i'm not "feeling it".

[Nylon Steelsen]

i like it. it sounds like how i feel sometimes. especially when my dad calls me depressed and thinks that chores would help crying

[MaverickKohaku]

I loved it. I feel the same way everyday.

[Elaine - sugar high]

yea, thats exactly how i felt, only 2 weeks ago..

[ii-Blu3 Dayz-ii]

this is how i feel all the time

[October098]

...........................please sergant bubbles (a.k.a plather) dont say im not sad.........and if i spelled something wrong please dont leave a mean comment.......and dont call me makena in public please