winter, rain, emotions.

• Artist: --Daughter of death--5
• Description: A poem with different topics, topics like winter, rain, happyness, and a mirror
  Enjoy and vote!!
• Date: 12/22/2008
• Tags: winter rain emotions

Winter has come.
A seaon without no sun,
So white and cold.

When it's very dark
Raindrops begin to fal,
someone is crying.

Happyness is light.
A rainbow so beautyfull,
The colors so bright.

A mirror inside,
Reflects someone outside but,
not the inside part.

Comments

[Long~Lost~Dream]

That's good. Just remember to watch your grammar. I'm sure with time you'll progress a lot more. =] Good job! Maybe you could take topics such as these and write a poem for them each rather than combining them. Just have fun with it and keep up the good work!