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Everyone here who is an outcast! This one is for you! So if I catch any prissy stuck-ups singin' this, they're gonna get it.
To those of you who've tried....
To those of you who've been forgotten....
To those of you who've cried....
To whom it may concern.......
This one's for you!
Because you deserve it!
This one's for you!
Because I know it hurts!
When they beat you down....
Said you'd never make it....
They tried to break you....
But you could take it....
They said you weren't good enough....
With fake pleasant words and smiles....
And you were so meanly snubbed....
You felt bad for a while....
This one's for you!
Because you made it to me!
This one's for you!
Even though you hate them!
When they had an in, it wasn't fair....
They say that's life, but they really don't care....
They cheated, They cheated, They cheated....
They were conceited, conceited, conceited....
This one's for you!
Who played fair!
This one's for you!
Who need someone to be there!
I'll be there!
Just for you!
Cause I wanted!
Someone to be there, for me too!
- by Musical Beanbags |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/23/2008 |
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- Title: Eternal outcast
- Artist: Musical Beanbags
- Description: This is a song I wrote in the shower when I was really mad about not getting a role I wanted in a musical, my teacher told me I was a better singer, but I can't remember my lines. Oh well is what I say now, but back then I was really mad.
- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: eternal outcast
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Musical Beanbags - 02/25/2009
- Umm.... Did I say that this was good? I came up with it in the shower, of course I'm not gonna think about form! xD lol anyways, thanks for the constructive criticism, but one thing. Saying that it isn't enough to be in here... well.... go look at every repetitive song about love, or losing it, and then talk to me about not being good enough. I thought I'd post it, because I didn't read it half a million times before. :3
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- Swanny11 - 02/23/2009
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To me,Kon,it lacks nothing.
I could own your a** with songs.
think about this poem/song.
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- Kon2000 - 01/27/2009
- To be honest, this piece lacks form and lyricism. It's not enough to rant and rhyme. Any 14 year old girl with a diary can do that. Pay attention to phonetics and the structure of the phrases. Be mindful of the syllable count per phrase. Some study of poetic form would probably help you with that.
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- l Prince Danny l - 01/13/2009
- this is exacly y im emo nice
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- Musical Beanbags - 12/25/2008
- PEOPLE! I have one request. *deep breath* OOOOOOOH COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT!!!!!! XP
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- Burn-The-Priest6 - 12/23/2008
- Hehe nice I like it when ur mad Beany
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- 2RainbowColoredQuissants - 12/23/2008
- You may have been mad, but in a way it makes since. Congrats,I liked it.
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