SORROW IN THE DEEPEST HEART

• Artist: xhanni-chanx
• Description: this is how i feel like after break up with someone i love in my life ones upon a time... but now i have lost him in wander plain of fog in my life ..... real happen indeed ..
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: sorrow deepest heart

the light seems to be fade from me ,
the sorrow in my deepest heart ..


what is wrong with me i wander ?,
to hard to breath and live ...


is someone there to company me;
in this lonely road where i am now ?


to shared apart from my limb to limb,
feel numb till to the vain of my soul.


cry most of the time,
no one is there to hug me in the dark. .

will i find myself happy ,
when there is no one to hold me tight.


leave to be alone,
years in my live in the dark ...


will anyone help ??? ,
will someone find me ??,
before everything is to late ...

Comments

[Sabbra-Cadabra23]

you have a really good concept going on here and you did well in expressing yourself. but your grammar is atrocious. your sentence structure, your spelling and even the context in which you use some words and phrases is a little off. but you have a lot of potential, if you keep working at it, you could create something truly fantastic.

[Grand Chimera]

that was betiful kuro.
belicimo! TT,TT

[KratosHeroOfYore]

Yeah too bad for me and you, its better to have loved than to never have loved at all. Think thats how it goes..

[XxMoonlitxRedxRosexX]

i understand how it feels =o don'tt bee sad ashy's gonna save you!!!! -gives you a big bear hug-

[Myto-Kennedy]

I will help ya >.<