Woman

• Artist: D I N O - D E M E N T I A
• Description: I don't know how to explain this poem. I wrote it when my girlfriend left me and I wanted to see it from her point of view, and this is what I got.
  
  Please leave comments :B
• Date: 12/24/2008
• Tags: woman

she wanted to be a blade

of grass amid the feilds

but he wouldn't agree

to be the dandelion



she wanted to be a robin singing

through the leaves

but he refused to be

her tree



she spun herself into a web

and looking for a place to rest

turned to him

but he stood straight

declining to be her corner



she tried to be a book

but he wouldn't read



she turned herself into a bulb

but he wouldn't let her grow



she decided to become

a woman

and though he still refused

to be a man

she decided it was all

right

Comments

[A Cats Curiosity]

5/5
Hmmmm I wonder why my kind is so needy. As a female we all have to whine and b***h about how the guy isn't exactly perfect.

[Chilly-VEXEN-Academic]

Wow Hintzke...
That's so deep and touching and sad...
5/5

[The JLB Sandwich]

I like the analogies used.
Deep yet subtle
Very nice.

[D I N O - D E M E N T I A]

Hey hey hey
It's my old one back at home
Not joo
:B

[xXSaku_nekoXx]

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