Your Name

• Artist: jessie54321
• Description: This is a really short poem and...... Well, yeah. That's about all I can say. I liked a guy this much before but like.... not anymore.
• Date: 12/26/2008
• Tags: your name love heart wind

I wrote your name in the sky, but the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand, but the sea washed it away.
I wrote your name in my heart and there shall it stay. heart

Comments

[steamyhappygrunny]

its okay i lik the idea but ur right its short maybe try spreading ur idea nd making it longer ^^ well good luck for nxt tym! ummm... 3/5

[jessie54321]

Umm.... Somebody comment?

[peanut_butter54321]

EEK! I FEELED LIKE DIS ONCE!!

[jess_jess15]

Nice, but like you said, a bit short. 3/5