Ivory Roses

• Artist: atsyrk
• Description:
• Date: 12/28/2008
• Tags: ivory roses

a love, deeper than the sky
soaring a million miles high
youre floatin on a cloud
and nothing can bring you down
you get a sensation
you recreation
better than youve ever felt
it makes your heart melt

youll never expect
what happens next
because when

(chorus)
ivory roses
meet shattering blows
and fiery tears
turn to nightmarish fears
you feel a depression
a painful lesson

its hard when you find
you can no longer say hes mine
heartbreak sets in
and he finally wins
cuz when

repeat chorus

IVORY ROSES

Comments

[Touketsu-x-Tsuki]

oops my bad! Ment song! I'm just not used to reading songs!
Sorry!

[Touketsu-x-Tsuki]

Wow this is a really good poem. You're an awesome writer!

[Danika Miles]

I really like this nice job

[x_V-Ghost-V_x]

I agree with Stone Rose

[emonition]

i agree

[Stone^_^Rose]

((it cut me off >.< wink ) Continuing: The chorus paints a lovely, heartbreaking picture of a beautiful, white rose falling to the floor and shattering into a million shards that shred the heart bringing forth tears of hatred, rage, and sorrow. Well done there.

[Stone^_^Rose]

Hm. This has a rather sudden ending and it drives me crazy that you don't use apostrophes (EX: you say "youve" instead of "you've" wink ; however this does have some nice lines. I absolutely love the last stanza, especially the lines "its hard when you find / you can no longer say hes mine" ((even though it should be "it's" because "it's" and "its" are two different words, just like "won't" and "wont" [wont means apt])). I do like the depiction of the ivory roses, though.