This gun wont shoot itself.

• Artist: __xXChoco-Chip-muffinXx__
• Description:
• Date: 12/30/2008
• Tags: wont shoot itself

here it comes all in one,
i cant find myself to shoot this gun,
i dont know who i think i am,
but all i know is i want this part to end.

I thought i could control this urge,
the one to make it all subcure,
im sitting in my closet sad,
i thought maybe i would stay mad,
but then the trigger flew off key,
i found myself begging in plead,
the blood was bad,
all over the floor,
all i know is i was know more.

so there i am screaming in pain,
with only one person but myself to blame,
i fall alseep and cant get up,
i feel so drowsy ,
and say this is enough.

finally i heard the moan aching to my stomach,
then i looked up to see a figure,
an angel if you will,
its presence started with warmth that filled.

This angel took the gun from my hand,
and pulled something out with a rubberband,
as he unravelled a strange looking cloth,
i realized he was just wiping the blood off,
i sat there helpless and saw a big light,
and the sounds just escaped from the night.

i awoke the sound of shattering glass,
to see the angel back in my grasp
it looked at me as did i to myself,
he told me guns dont shoot by itself.

Comments

[rockgirl2012]

i like it and even though the bible says different i still think it is nice. yes you really need grammer work, but the poem tells a good story. i have felt that way before and actually it was my best friend that saved me because he will not stand to know im in pain

[Hat_in_Underwear]

What is up with the grammer? And, not to be rude, but, have you ever read the bible? You kill yourself, you go to HE double-hocky-sticks

[apricot turtle]

Pretty good! ^^

I would advise you to make some grammer corrections, though. Because of that... Um... 3/5 ^^

[__xXChoco-Chip-muffinXx__]

this is a poem reallly about how depressed people can go and what extremes they go to