Angry Soul

• Artist: LunaticTokyoMoth
• Description: something i wrote a long time ago, though heavily edited
  i know it doesnt rhyme, its not supposed to.
  Okay now that i look at it, it sucks!
  Just read and comment please.
• Date: 01/01/2009
• Tags: sleeping soul angry revenge kiss

(refrain)
Ive been sleeping for millenia
Covered by a blanket of snow
Ive been alone
Ive been so cold

V1.
Why have you left me here?
Am I that unimportant to you?
Why have you not come back?
Am I that unimportant to you?

(refrain)

V2.
I guess I should have known.
Im sick of your s**t!
It was so obvious from the start.
Im sick of your s**t!

(refrain)

V3.
Ive awoken and Im pissed
Say goodbye to kisses
Ive been searching, and didnt miss.
Say goodbye to kisses

(refrain)

V4.
Ive been searching for your spirit
You had better be afraid
I will find you, and avenge myself
You had better be afraid

Comments

[xXBisexual FlanXx]

Oh, yeah, I remember when you wrote this in 6th grade. Finally got around to revising it? I think the chorus needs some change-ination, though.

[William Saint Claire]

It's alright, some words need to be changed, or spelled right, there;s some punctuation issues, and i would take out the all the refrain, and v1 ect, and put it all together.

[1-800-crayons2]

you suck at this. STOP NOW!!!!!!!!