March towards Eternity

• Artist: im teh gay man
• Description: I actually had an event behind this, can anyone guess what this is? Made it with really no knowledge of poems, just wanted to write something. Please tell me what you think! If you want, PM me with your idea of what this is about, or if you want to know. ;D
• Date: 01/02/2009
• Tags: marching towards eternity

Beckon forth the Darkness of the heart,
And deny the Light the stands for us,
To achieve an eternal body, not a part,
So all veterans against us call distress.

For we are Civilization, Peace, and Justice,
Eternal amongst all beings of Earth,

Having caused Darkness in the name of peace,
The Light shall shine its brightest,
And at the greatest height of expansion, we cease,
Because the God that guided us has fallen, a man again.

For we were Civilization, Peace, and Justice,
Still Eternal amongst all beings of Earth.

Darkness has overcome us.
We no longer possess Gods Light.
We have unleashed a great mess!
And cannot revive the holy fight.

For we are Barbarians, War, and Oppression,
Forever Eternal amongst all beings of Earth.

Comments

[dunteatcatz]

You know what this makes me think of? It makes me think of the way humans have ruined everything special and raped the earth of it's innocence. Sorry, this is a big topic for me xD
But I enjoyed it! I can't think of what the event could be, perhaps a war of sorts?

[PartyPeople101]

what happened that u wrote this about?

[Savior_of_the_Red_Moon]

Yeah as i read it i thought it could be turned to a song too. i honestly have no idea what the poem means but it's very dark and i can picture a guy in a barren land looking up int the sky at the only source of light protruding the red clouds. i don't' know if that's what you were going for but it's very nice.

[vALkyRi_nej]

hey...that's really nice...i loved the way you wrote it...it could actually be turned to a song....im not really sure what the deepest meaning is...but it's like we're all sentenced toward eternal damnation...lol...nyways,,i really want to know what you mean by it...

keep up the good work...