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why the people is like that,
why we are different
why we dress different
why we have different relegions
why we live in other contry why no together
why we fight
why we run
why we have this planet
why we not together
like a just one people
why we are people and what we are
- by such my BALLS soo HARD |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/02/2009 |
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- Title: people
- Artist: such my BALLS soo HARD
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- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: people
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- tiggymewmew - 01/04/2009
- Interesting but I think it should be revised some. "why the people is like that" would sound better as "why the people are like that" For poety and lyrics I like to write it and then a few days later go over it again, make any corrections and then post/print it. 3nodding Good start.
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- Vilessie - 01/03/2009
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alil confusing but nice
(much repitition of conjunctions)
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