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Jack and Jill went up the hill
To kill the peasant's daughter
Jack fell down and destroyed the town
And jill ate him after
- by Twilight_Juliet101 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/02/2009 |
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- Title: Jack and Jill
- Artist: Twilight_Juliet101
- Description: me and my friend were thinking about evil tales and she made her own version of this song. and i made mine (her user is twilightaholic101)
- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: jack jill
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- Sapphire_Honuka_73 - 01/19/2009
- i agree with the person below. but i really like the poem.
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- Church-Alyxis - 01/04/2009
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I really like this poem. If I had to read this before anyone, the ONLY portion I would take a slight creative license with would be the final line and how I delivered the whole poem: After each "what would I do?" i'd wait a breath, then say the next two lines.
What would I do?
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