Bubbles

• Artist: My Optional Angel
• Description: Author's Notes: I came up with one day while I was cleaning my bedroom. Also I was trying to go for a theme challenge with having a poem to every Cardcaptor Sakura card. Have yet to do all of them; currently I have only made two: Bubbles and Arrow.
  
  All poems I submit are made by Pamela R. (my birth name). Some poems may have been seen around the internet made by Viper Miona, which is one of my aliases on deviant art, my journal and here on Gaia.
• Date: 01/03/2009
• Tags: bubbles clean trash room mess

Dirty, Stinky, Filthy Mess
All upon the floor
It's time I'd better clean it up
And step on it no more

Pick up this, Pick up that
All around this room
First I have to pick the trash
And then I get the broom

Back and Forth, To and Fro
Is the movement that I use
Then after I have swept the floor
I start to mop the room

Bubbles, Bubbles, Everywhere
All upon the floor
Now I'm done and I've cleaned up
And it's a mess no more

Comments

[Sweenys_Revenge]

That was really cute.
I love the whimsy of it all.
I just saw a little girl in pigtails bouncing around to it.

[AlyceSyn]

Nice. it's got a good rhythm! I read it kinda like this: 1-2-3-4
But yeah, pretty nice!

[kazekawa]

I like that it'a sweet poem