Hate of Flowers

• Artist: NakedJack
• Description: Its something sappy for gaians to read. There is a bit of visual in there, shouldn't be too hard to see. I try to pack as much meaning in a small space as possible and this poem is no different and don't think its that simple.
  As a side note, if you are going to vote, comment. I posted this for others to enjoy, nothing would please me more than to see an attempt to interpret the meaning of it in the comments.
• Date: 01/04/2009
• Tags: jealous battle combat love

In a fray
Two lovers sway
Dissonance of battle's play
A lofty embrace, to forget trouble's dismay
Cleaving attention from footslogger of lovers so gay
Flowers blooming in fallen leaf decay; injustice charge to draw pay
And The lovers they did slay

Comments

[taken_by_suprize]

i think i remember this one... then again i have read most of your poems and i still like each and everyone in there own way.

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I like. :]
I would attempt to explain my interpretation of it, but it would sound crazy.
You say it's sappy, but to me it almost seems.. haunted. Maybe I'm weird. On any note, well done.