Tsukuyomi

• Artist: Undead Wolf of Ashes
• Description: This poem was originally for my Lit. class and it's been posted up on deviantart.com so yeah. Enjoy!
• Date: 01/16/2009
• Tags: tsukuyomi

Why do you cry so much?
Even the stars can not seem to comfort you
you weep in sorrow as you watch us.
Do you cry because of us?
Forgive us Tsukuyomi

You watch as we commit horrible crimes
even when we know you are there we still act out.
they think of you as no one
yet you still have a heart.
Please forgive us Tsukuyomi.


Your gentle light touches everything
yet even the flowers won't open up to you
and the firflies beat away your light.
We hear you crying but we do not look up.
Please forgive us Tsukuyomi.

Are we frightening to you?
Is that why you shrink away into darkness?
Little by little your light dissapears from out blind eyes.
Are we that hideous?
Please come back Tsukuyomi

Comments

[Princess12050]

it ok. But to be honest, it wouldnt be one of mah favorites

[Jasmine Callisto]

i liked it. ^^ awesome job. ^^

[XXS1MPLY_M3XX]

it was good..i kinda liked it..but it's just not something that i would die for, but it is still very good

[Undead Wolf of Ashes]

Come on! It won't hurt if you comment, honest! ^-^ It doesn't hurt me not to mention you get gold doing it! So please don't be shy, and tell me what you think about it! ^-^