The love is like the death

• Artist: Yosaoru
• Description: Well , this is the first poem i ever wrote....just enjoy it (well , at least if likes u)
  be gentle plz ^^
• Date: 01/20/2009
• Tags: love like death

the love and the death....
sometimes they are like a friendly bullet
who pierces the real skin of our own existence

sometimes...we need that kind of forces for taking ourselves to worlds of inmaculate nature...to our ownworld of pain and joy the same ones who saves us...
the same one who kills us...

death is like love and the love is like death...both necesary...both hurtfull sometimes...both united by the hand of life...

in these continually changing times they're mostly the same...Only these flowing emotions, events,violently, painfully makes time stop with the power of life and death...


everything good seems to be ending
Within the neverending death in cooperation with love
what more can be lost?...just your life and what makes you live...the love itself

but...the death is not the end , the truly end is when the love dies....

its strange , love means ''never dies'' but...sometimes it just dies without reason...

the death...just happens...the love...just makes you live forever

Comments

[Ninkitty]

Nice poem. I like it.

[Beautiful Controversy]

i likeyyy. ^______^
very creative!! biggrin
my only helpful comment is this:
"the death is like the love and the love is like the death...both necessary...both hurtful"
you could (if you want) take out the "the"s in there, it will sound smoother.
[death is like love. love is like death, both are necessary; both painful]

[Marionette_Mentation]

i can releate to much that you have stated in an emotional way.. comment back plz..^.^

[Death_0f_Death]

i like it. you only truly die when u are forgoten