A Ghost

• Artist: Scruffy_dog02
• Description: This poem is about a ghost who wishs to be able to love and be loved once again. I wrote ths in retrospect of a dream I had recently. I could not talk to this ghost in my dream, could not touch him, could not comfort him and his tears. I wrote this for him.
• Date: 01/24/2009
• Tags: ghost depressed lost forgotten

I long for the soil,
I lust for the sand.
For my feet to touch Earth,
I yearn for the land.
I ache for the soul,
Pine for a life to live.
Human emotion so precious,
Thirst for chance to give.
A hunger for love,
I crave for a heart.
As empty as a box,
Life as I once knew it, had fallen apart.
A wish to live once more,
An itch for attention.
Long lost and forgotten,
Just wanting affection.

Comments

[yellowasiann]

i liked it .
but heres a little piece of advice :
end it with a better sentence.

[marvin the squirrel]

touching.