jacky

• Artist: ill be ur sun
• Description: a poem i wrote for my gf
• Date: 01/24/2009
• Tags: jacky

sweet heeart you are great
a treat of art it must be fate
being with you makes me shake
freeing me like an escape
your beauty is pure
the more i see you is like my cure
cutest girl in the world i bet
atleast cuter than all the girls i've met
baby im not very clever
but i wanna keep you forever

Comments

[sezuko]

nice i liked it

[ZombifiedDancingMushrooms]

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[Bunnochist]

Keep on writing, these are all really good.

[Savior_of_the_Red_Moon]

That's a pretty great poem. keep up the good work.