Broken

• Artist: Belrock of Morgoth
• Description: It's a poem I wrote the other day. I got really bored, and I had writer's block so I just decided to type. I know it's depressing, but I love it :)
• Date: 01/26/2009
• Tags: broken

I try to see
Through the years
If there is life
After the pain and tears

I have no doubt
That I may live on
Even though my heart is broken
And undoubtedly long gone

All that's left
Is a deep abyss
That I'm sure
No one would ever miss

So even if
You come crawling back to me
With agony in your eyes
And down on your knees
Begging me to give you another chance
Constantly repeating "please"

I'll have to look away
And say "no"
That you were cruel to me
And you treated our relationship like a joke

When you left
You left me standing in the rain
Never looking back
To see if I could handle the pain

So I'm not sorry
Now you see how I feel
When you broke my heart,
When you put me through that whole ordeal

Baby, I'm over you
I've locked my heart away
To never again
Send it your way

Comments

[Belrock of Morgoth]

Oh, no I didn't isolate myself. My friends would never leave me be if I did =P. Anyway, this was written when I was feeling really sad and I was thinking about some past conversations with a friend of mine.

[Belrock of Morgoth]

thank you all! smile

[xXblack-lighteningXx]

wow this is an amazingly good poem! also pls rate dis poem http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101031975#title

[Kalawyn]

That's a really, really good poem. I can relate to you, but the ending...I hope you didn't really go that? You know, isolate yourself in darkness? Anyways, 5/5.

[Xo_RaNdOm-BiSh_oX]

I liked it, it was really good shows alot of emotion

[Spicesayy]

really like it.....idk but for some reason i see the tital better as "The light of day".....but thats just an opinion