Feelings interrupted...

• Artist: FF8-chik
• Description: For my partner, just mixed emotions.. Enjoy ^^
• Date: 01/28/2009
• Tags: feelings interrupted love

heart You delight me in the ways that I never could imagine, like you put me through a phase of amazement full of passion, in comparison I've told you many times you're the one who could define a living spirit in this temple of everlasting crimes. You've lifted me you've been the one to change my mind. Yet the blur in my soul rages like a scorching hammer, in a sense of perfect manner stir a storm through the whole point of living in a body when it's torn, you piece together, all the pages show a story of my love for you... heart

Comments

[SourPatches123]

Nicee . :] .

[xX_KoNeko_Mew_Xx]

great!! love it smile
yours about love.. i made one on the top of my head...
read it.. but its sort of about hell...

[FF8-chik]

Sorry about the punctuation, was in a rush when I wrote it off the top of my head and ended up saying it too fast. But thank you. ^^

[Voduhn]

Thats is an amazing description. Big Kudos!
Although, it would have been easier to read if you added more punctuation. Commas would help separate and articulate thoughts.
I enjoyed it!