Stream of conciousness

• Artist: devious culprit
• Description: kind of emo, oh well
  
  description of the direction my life is going
  different feelings, whatever
  i like it
• Date: 01/31/2009
• Tags: stream conciousness

adrift
flailing about
i wallow in an ever deepening hole of my own self-worthlessness
drowning in a sea of failure,
i see a ray of hope
only to quash it and snuff out my tiny salvation
someone throws a lifeline, but it's too late,
I've already succumbed
flailing
falling
sinking
wandering life
crushing ambition
hopeless adoration
find me
save me
kill me
anger wells, threatening to consume me
i fight it to no avail, consuming me
turning me into myself
pulling out my hate, my fear, my life
twisting me
eating me
killing me
burning me
i feel it rotting me from within
but i can't
help feel that
i need it there
corrupting me
killing me
from the inside out

Comments

[superaku]

Check out some of my stuff tho if you want to... comment and rate please.

[superaku]

wow. your life sucks outrageously.... and church robbery needs to chill a little bit because no one really understands how you feel but you,k?! so for anyone to come at you like that is wrong..

[Usaji-san]

Lol, sorry, just what I thought. xD

[Roboticyouth]

do better, or die.

[devious culprit]

wow, you're a d**k
at least you're honest

[Church Robbery]

It's horrid. It's pathetic. It lacks original thought. It doesn't flow. The word choice is poor. The message is about as deep as a spoon full of water.

[devious culprit]

yeah, but i don't usually show it like this
and i don't usually write poetry...i'm just really freaking bored
it took me like five minutes to do that