"The sonnet of Octo"

• Artist: xx Koloblicin xx
• Description: This is a self made sonnet. Anyone who knows about them will notice it is not in a traditional format, as it is only 8 line with 8 syllables (instead of 10) hense the name...
  
  it seems short but you try making 8 lines each 8 syllables long that rhyme in an AABB pentameter
• Date: 02/03/2009
• Tags: sonnet octo poetry poem sonnet

Dreaming of a hopeful future
Only for a doubtful tenure
Once seeing the glass as half full
Now running from a raging bull
Life starts with such a blissful light
But quickly turns into a fright
Looking to the lofty heavens
Simply to fall down into hell

Comments

[x- ur worst fear A -]

Hmm.. its kinda intersting in the begging.
but the end you end too change things good a bit.
4/5