STOP

• Artist: Hakuo The White Phoenix
• Description: I wrote this because of all the people i've seen talking or writeing about these things because they think its cool or they think they know what its like when we both know they have no idea how it feels. But I don't usualy show how it affects me I let go of the pain with humor but when see these things happening it kills me inside because they use my own experiences for their own benefit even though its just hurt me.
• Date: 02/03/2009
• Tags: stop

For some reason everyone
seams to think its fun
to write about sadness
to think about despair
to talk about their madness
or what makes them really scared
do they think its all a game
thats its all for show
they all like to claim
that they really know
about defeat about decisions
about suicide about depression
but have they ever lived it?
no not quite like we have done
so please don't forget
to stop doing this for fun
because it still hurts inside
and evertime I see this
a little bit of me will die.

Comments

[writervsworld]

finally ppl who get it! dude i do the same s**t! laugh it out. so ppl don't freak out and force pills down ur throat. and ya i hate stupid lil poserz who think they have it sooo bad! just want to slap them! which i probably sound like 1 myself, yuck, sorry, but i totally get u! 5/5 and the humor can never cover up what's really underneath...

[NakedJack]

Holy s**t, that would suck, if I told someone about my life and they used it to write poems so they can feel like they've accomplished something. Such selfish bastards, and they don't even realize they are dong it. Hardly does anyone here appreciate art. They have trouble seeing past the surface of their own actions much less the complex workings of another. 5/5

[screamed before birth]

cool man *a little bit of me will die* so original and cool