Emotional Turmoil

• Artist: 290DarkStars
• Description: I wrote this actually commenting on someones poem... its ok i guss.
• Date: 02/10/2009
• Tags: emotional turmoil

After a deep cut to the chest
Your own friends lay you to rest.
And you know that you can't do your best.
And you know that it's no test
All your dreams just left your nest
And waddya know, you could have guessed,
The only one that you love holds the knife to your chest...

Comments

[1so_so11rry_ari11]

wow.... that's how i felt at a point in time... like the one i loved finally turned his back... and it sucked like hell to know there is no one to turn to... though it is short but whatever its amazing :]

[jairakan]

This is a great poem, it's quite Poe-ish. I love it. 5/5.

[Daddy Got This Account]

mmm.. dark, i have felt this way. well, you know that. lol. ^^" but like the last comment, very deep. very, emotional. ^^ 5/5

[Husk3]

deep dude