death

• Artist: tenten_freak1_fan
• Description: i think it says a lot of my life
• Date: 02/10/2009
• Tags: death

as the sun comes up on my horrable day i wake up walk around and there i lay
crashing to the floor knocking the breath right out of me as i lay there i
think out of all my days i have never had a good one now im high and above
now im finley haveing a good one

Comments

[AceOfTheHeart]

hmm..... its notg bad but its not good either..... you described your feeling you just need to be more descriptve...... and most pepole like longer poems but me i could care less 4/5